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Portraying and Bringing your Characters to Life
Adding TOUCH to your stories is the next storytelling technique that we are going to learn.
This technique is very powerful and ties back into displaying your personality and bringing your characters to life.
This really helps paint the picture and get your audience more involved.
Example for this would be like "My friend and I were walking over there like this... (lock arm in arm)."
Only hold whatever touch you are displaying for the appropriate part of the story. If you are using something like the arm and arm example, you would only do it for that short instance, not tell the rest of the story arm and arm.
An example I would use in my story is when describing his weirdness would be "I would be talking with some of my friends and he would come up from behind me, stick his arm around me like this (put arm on girls shoulder and pull her in, give her a little shake, showing exactly what he did to me).
Continue telling your story while initiating the touch and not looking at where you are touching or pausing and waiting for any form of reaction. So that you won't look obvious.
Another fun thing that can be added into your stories is subtle hints that raise your desirability.
These include mentioning other girls in your life, having special social privileges, being the leader of your group, and doing things that make you stand out.
These are all essentially tasteful ways to brag in your stories... without actually bragging. Now you don't need these but in some cases can add a special flare to your stories.
I often mentioning other girls in my stories. You can do this by changing the word "friend" to "girlfriend" or name dropping by saying "my friends Lisa and Sarah" anything along those lines.
They are just minor details. This never have to be the focus of your story and this need to be subtle.
To make them theme authentic, do not provide an explanation for them. If part of your story involves you hooking up with multiple people, don't provide an explanation for it, instead just keep talking, it's not the focus of the story and by not providing an explanation, it comes off as a perfectly natural thing that is no big deal.
Once you have thrown in all these fun storytelling techniques it time to give it the once over.
Eliminate all unnecessary content and redundancies. Make sure your story is moving along and does not drag out. That is the biggest problem people make, they drag their stories out too long about things that don't affect the overall story.
At this moment...you will have a goal of 2 minutes stories.
How much you share all depends on how your storytelling skills develop. A masterful storyteller could captivate the audience for 20 minutes. But for now, focus on getting 2-3 solid minutes of your audiences attention.
Remember to look for clues of people fading out so you know when to speed things up and get to the punch line.
Always make sure you are keeping eye contact, this will help hold the audiences attention.
So here's the FINAL revised version of my story. Enjoy:
Me: "Hey guys...how do you deal with people when you just caaaaannt get them to leave you alone?!"
Group: "blah blah"
Me: "Yeah that's interesting so check this out...the other day I am at Club Voodoo, you ever been? (Check in point)...Cool, anyway I walk in with a group of my friend Lisa and some friends she brought along. There is a decent amount of people in the club, we are all having a great time and meeting lots of cool new people.
Well this one guy somehow works his into my "group" and he just has this annoying vibe. Like he is so out of place, he was walking around with a Harley Davison Motorcycle hat on and like this tainted banana colored polo. You know when someone just clearly does not belong and seems out of place... kind of like that guy (Put arm on person from audiences shoulder and point to someone else outside the audience)
So my friends and I keep trying to avoid him but he just won't back down, he would just follow us everywhere we went, buzzing around like a mosquito...with a really bad taste in clothing...like you have no idea how bad it was, I would be talking to some of Lisa's friends and he would come up, stick his head between us and wrap us both in his arms and give us a little shake like this...(Do exactly what he did on them) And the worst part is he had this nasty...thick breath....oh it was terrible.
(Random Story Telling Tip: Appeal to the senses, especially the smell, it is the least addressed and most memorable.) Anyway... my friends and I try to get away by going to the VIP floor and we have been drinking the free energy drinks all night and made a super tall pyramid out of cans. (Illustrate structure with arms).
Then all of a sudden, the creepy guy weasels his way onto the floor and sits down at our table... and like a jackass he tries to add a can to the structure. (Start slowing things down for the punch line)
Little did he know... that although the Red Bull on the top of the structure was opened... it was full... so this guy tries to add his can to the top then BAM!...................the whole structure falls right into his lap and the filled soda can pours all over his crotch!
(Create dramatic spill scene around your crotch, getting the girl to look there, although sneaky, creates lots of subtle sensual messages)
It looked like he wet his pants!
His face turns beat red and he just runs downstairs and we assume he left the club cause we didn't see him again... I don't know what the big deal is...I thought it was hilarious!
(Share a good laugh with your audience, initiate more touch if you so please, initiating touch during laughter is very powerful)
Now if we look back at the original example of...
"So the other day I am at club voodoo with my friends and I am going around making some new friends and having a good time. Well this one guy somehow works his way into my group but then ends up not leaving us alone all night, and he was a really annoying person that you just don't want to talk to. He kept making every interaction in the club awkward and would not leave until he actually gets a hint and goes home."
You can see the dramatic changes these techniques can make to any story.
Before I end up my newsletter...I want to leave you with a couple advanced story telling tips.
- If you are telling the same story, increase vocabulary in it, use powerful verbs and adjectives to bring the story to life.
- Always be painting a picture, if possible appeal to all senses.
- Avoid pauses like "ummmm and ugghhh" everyone has a bad habit when they stumble in their stories.
- Start your stories at the end. If you ever saw the movie Fight Club you will notice how you are caught up into the story right from the beginning because you are curious to see how Edward Norton's character got himself in such a dangerous situation. You can start your story at the end then build up to really captivate your audience.
- The more emotion you put into a story the better, the more emotion you show in a story, the more mistakes you can make because your emotion and commitment to the story covers all that up.
- Do not memorize your stories. You don't want to sound like you are reading from a script, you want it to seem natural. It is possible to be too good at telling your stories and then it is almost like the listener is watching a scripted play. Just understand the concepts and events of your story, there should always be some slight differences when you tell your story. Practice telling it...but don't become a scripted narrator.
-Lastly and most important to sum things up....
Tell your stories TO your audience and NOT AT your audience....
Always make sure that your audiences are getting involved when you're telling your story, keep your eyes open for cues in the interaction you do not always have time to look for.
And use these cues to find what points of your stories get certain reactions, and use them to move the story along. You pick up on different things if you are telling a story you know well, this is another way storytelling continues to improve your game.
Things to Avoid when Meeting a Girl
There are times that the first thing that most men do when meeting a woman is show to her that they understand GAME.
They'll start talking about evolution, alpha males, how girls will always cheat on their boyfriends, how they know girls like intimacy more than guys etc.
I refer to this things as nonsense as "The Talk of Death".
Let me explain why, and also give you a very counter-intuitive idea of what to do instead.
The kind of things I've learned in pick-up generally will make your conversation topics very poor to women. Especially hot ones.
This might work with the social anthropologist student, but not to the girl that any man in his right mind would be attracted to.
Now there are a few major things wrong with this strategy:
(BTW - if you do happen to meet a girl that loves this kind of stuff, by all means talk about it, I'm just saying it should not be used as an ATTRACTION strategy for most of the female population)
1. This will puts a woman on the defensive level. It's like one country telling it's battle plans to another country that it is at war with.
It shows that you are "thinking too much" about the dynamic, which not only is a big turn off, but also makes a woman think you're going to be a mind-trip.
2. Chances are, the woman's awareness level is about 10% of yours.
Especially if you're keeping up on my "Stepped Awareness" newsletter.
Have you tried playing a song you LOVED for a friend and she just didn't get it?
That's because their awareness didn't go through the same process that yours had - and resulted in you really liking the song...
To a woman who used most of her time thinking of new shoes and clothes, celebrities and her problems with her boss, your talk about "the unique mating patters of the bonobo apes and how it relates to the women in the club" wouldn't you think its too alien and weird for her.
This is the same reason why you'll sometimes see the biggest AFC ever with a smoking hot woman. He's normal, and she can easily introduce him to her friends without embarrassment!
3. To a woman that DOES understand it; what you're talking about it make it seem like a big deal, when it should be plainly obvious.
There are 5-10% of women that DO get this stuff. It's obvious, intuitive and accepted for them.
These women tend to also like women, capable of open relationships, and generally a lot of fun.
But here's the thing - the guys they end up dating ALSO get this stuff intuitively.
And when you get something intuitively, you'll never go out of your way to persuade another person of it, or explain it like it's some huge revelation!
So once you do that, the women who are most suitable for the lifestyle you're looking for, will instantly disqualify you.
So here's what t do instead...
Well – her are some of the most powerful techniques that I use:
- Understand society's programming,
Understand the woman's specific programming, and
Appear to be under the exact same programming.**
And also keep your knowledge of REALITY to yourself (and if you figure out anything amazing, I would appreciate it if you could share it on my forum as well)
Once you get this stuff right, you'll going to see a big difference in your game.
And I want to be part of it.